

The hated sentence also has the problems of not having a subject and of shifting verb tense within the paragraph.
I didn’t realize how poorly written it was when I read it…I tend to write like that on essays and get a big ‘AWKWARD’ written throughout.
(Source: reasoningwithvampires)
Pot, kettle. Have you met?
“Getting married fresh out of high school to a man she barely knew, then producing [Bella] a year later.” Hmmm, this...
Have I mentioned how much I like reading these?
Isn’t the last sentence exactly what Bella did? But Edward’s her stone-cold Adonis, so it’s all good.
wait that’s a MISTAKE? Funny, didn’t bella do the EXACT same thing with EdwarD? Married him straight out of highschool...
could be a way bella is saying...her relationship wih edward is possibly already a...
Now, my biggest problem with this isn’t the one Dana has pointed out (even though that also makes me want to claw my...
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